I agree with everyone. This is a great piece. It is full of emotion and very well written. The structure was good, and it the meaning really touched me. It is like the most innocent people are the ones that always seem to be taken, and whether you knew them or not, they touch you in ways that you never thought possible. Same thing happened with some people that were at my school, yet I didnt know. Guess it doesnt matter who it is, it happens. Overall Great job. Keep em comin. Much respect.