I'm listenin' now and the first verse is not good, the second verse is cool, better delivery and more into the flow and beat. I say this a lot on this site but you need better mic presence and need to come with more confidensec on the mic. You got a good feel for the beat just wreck that fuckin mic a lil more. This doesen't mean screem just come harder you sound a lil bitchish on the mic, not so soft. If you keep droppin and workin on this shit you'll see elevation only then. I see you got only 1 cut on soundclick. I'd like to check yer progress and see what yer spittin on yer fifth or sixth cut. Get better, but good effort. You had a good break and descent chorus. Yer structure was good i would take that as a major positive from this drop. Check my new cut..."A Thievez Execution" in songs forum and feedback kiiiid.