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Seriously, both of you.. Get to the point.
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ya say u claustraphobic rite...well im commin in wit rhymes/
u must be gay, cause u guys stick close together like u got dicks glued to ya behinds/
Badly worded crew diss, I suggest you try another concept next time
when u up against me ur gonna need rhymes that are outside the box/
T.H.O.G is bak? y so he can get banned again..on another name he not?/
^I don't know what you're talking about there..
This cat's flow is weak, like Being owned by Memphis ya fate looks real Bleek/
This kid could be Santa giving out hot coals and still not Bring Heat/
^Bring heat lines are played, they went out with the
hammerdance
This fool is hopeless, he cant See the Picture like Blind Artists/
You could Give Webster Brain and ya punches still couldnt Define Illness/
^Also an old concept.
im Capsizing ya Flow, you could Give Head to Midgets and still not Lay Low/
Makin toothpicks of ya Bones, you so stupid u the kid puttin 50 Cent album In Payphones/
I liked the last line.. But midget/short lines are played too. .
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On to the next. .
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With Modern Day Convicts....Ill Tie A Nuse Around Ur Neck
Cuz Awaiting Ur Ecution...Is The Only Way Ull Hang Around With Vets
^Mmm word it better. .
PreWriting Lyrics Placed In Ur Pants...Like R.I.P ill Leave Ur Fate Resting.In.Pockets
With X Ecution As Ur Handle,It Seems Like The Only Thing Ur Exacuting Is Losses
^Average. .
A-Waiting My Ecution,Ull Still Feal My Spits With A Bag Over My Face
Ill Drag U All Over The Place,N end Ur Life Now,Without Leaving A Trace
^Filler. . Self proclaimation = No no
If Ecution Was A Chess Champion,He Still Wouldnt Bring Skill To Tha Board
My Flows Like Watter,But Ill Get In Side Ur Solids Like I Put My Nails In Tha Floor
^Chess concept was alright. . Haven't seen it too much. .
Consider this At The End Of Ur Lines / That Happens To Be The Only Short Line Ur Postin
Even Ur Body Couldnt Flow With Mine,If I Hate U Exacuted In Oceans
^Water/Flow lines are played.
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Conclusion? Try and come up with current day punches. Consider watching the news, and incorporating it into your verse. It works well.. Trust me. Honestly I thought this battle was kinda below average. I'm not the greatest battler myself but I'd have to say. .
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