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aiight, I'm not try to say votes but I just wanted to explain a few things.
some guy said my punches weren't well thought out????
And then some one else said they wasn't feeling it or didn't make sense, so I'll try to explain it, next time just ask me.
your name is oversyted, wackness couldn't reach me, I cloud your iris/
^^^play off his name, 'looking over him or past him'....oversighted
your naked verses scream for closure(clothes), so I do the impossible, like Iraqi's silence/
^^^ok maybe this wasn't the best punch here, or could've been better.
must be double-vision? seeing no potential but potential minus, the plastic virus/
shutsdown syteds immune record(0-0), from what seems two zeros to a closed eyelid(0-1)/
^^^I was talking about his record, I thought that some would at least see my creativity but nevermind. First I was saying his record would have a potential minus as in -1, an i related his record to eyes, so when he lost.....ok this could've been better too.
resentul defiance, forcefully pilling rhyming, his punches play hero, til' I kill his sidekick/
^^^punches....hero....sidekick, get it.
murdered in front of the whole RB, I'm the inventor of distracting violence/
^^^self explanatory.
quick to step up and lose? must be fast with kindness/
^^giving me a win.
strike a match a behind him....I'll probably flame it/
this fag is burning, throw punches? like his potty training never learned to aim it/
ya' rhymes is still all buttcheek, even if you took time to write it cause your an anus/
^^^he said before we keyed our verse he need a little time extra time to write it.
I just felt his verse didn't much apply to me but, if i lose whatever, hope this clears things up.
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