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Old 11-02-03, 02:09 PM   #7
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my vote goes to MM

Edicius - you had good content but i was feelin the abstractness of your flow... at times it was hard to follow...

The struggles i tryed to conquer remains oftenly un-rewarded,
and the damaged sources,to bad as it is arent vastly improving.
The rapidly disappearing, of exposing aspects of my expression,
only the final results suprisely just keep on coming disregarded.
^^^my favorite part of your whole verse... i klike the meaning

MM - your verse was solid... it was an enjoyable read... i like your whole first verse... the imagry is dope, and i like how you twisted it... goood shit