well this was definitly unique
ive never read something alone the lines of dont trip of my lashes

its one of these pieces, that my meaning will tend to differ for person to person. and sometimes the writer doesnt even truley understand why they might have writen lines

you did a good job it protraying this in a way that grabs the attention of others, and makes them listen. because its something they neven saw before, or put it in a different light.

The flow and structure worked well in this, and i like the short paragraphs and one liners throu out this piece.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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