Aiight, the piece was average. Yea, it flowed well, but I wasn't really feelin either verse. I liked the chorus tho.

Edicius:

Wasn't feelin any of your lines, simplistic shit, nawmean? Don't take it the wrong way, but I jus didn't really get into your verse.

Potent:

Was an improvement from Edicius, but still average. Ya had a nice bar tho.

They've a feel to spend cash,I hate when they cum back
Most blokes don't but they hoax it & then they stun cats
^^ I was feelin that.

Rythmic Tendicies:

Hook was nice, got it's point across.

OVERALL: As I haven't read other drops from ya'll, I can't say much about ya skills, but I'd say to Edicius: Up ya verses a bit, get a lil more complex, ya feel me? And to Potent: Verse was nice cuz, keep droppin and uppin. Nice piece altogether.

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-Formula.