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Old 11-02-03, 03:36 PM   #2
Formula
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Word.. you was in Jail? What for?

To the piece:

The Flow is what made this piece good. Ya didn't lost the flow the whole piece, and that's a plus. Vocab was present in various lines, so props for that. Not really as deep as it coulda been, nawmean? I expected an emotion filled piece about struggles behind the bars and shit, but it's all good. I was impressed. Keep droppin, up the vocab, and keep the flow as is: On Point.

we act on how we think,actually dont think at all
maybe thats why were all confined behind these brick walls.
^^ Lotta meaning behind that bar. Best of the drop.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89235
^^ Drop a reply in return for my piece, aight?

-Formula.
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