LM, I read your other two open mics, haven't replied yet, but they were dope (specially Mom, I'm Sorry). This one.. ehh.. the 8 Mile feel to it turned me off. Don't get me wrong, the flow was there and love knowing that the piece is easy to read by the flow, but jus the lack of everything else is what made this piece below average compared to your others.

Work On: Multi's, definately. Make ya shit more complex, make us think about it when we're readin, nawmean? Ya got the deep part down (as you showed in Mom, I'm Sorry), just get more complex on it.

Don't Change: The Flow. The Flow is, in a sense, Makin ya piece real good.

Keep Droppin.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89235
How's bout droppin a reply to that aight? Thanks.

-Formula.