This was your best flow yet. .I didn't seem a single fault within it. .Also nice & smooth. .Im pretty sure i got the topcic. .

i dont know how it happened but i felt so small
at sea i was aboard in a plastic land of squalls

Great opener. .

my hands turned slippery and i looked above at fate
the nailed hand gripped weight i couldnt escape

Felt that line. .Dope imagery, rolled off tongue

This was a very tight piece. .Lookin out for more of yours. .Everyone of your pieces are laced with complexity. .Pz