Thread: Sunk!?
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Old 11-02-03, 04:20 PM   #7
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Dope Dope Dope Piece man. As I've Said before, the flow is what attracts me to reading drops. As does complexity. Flow @ Complexity @ the presence of vocab and multi's made this piece incredible dog, forreal. Had some ill imagery placed within it too. Shit, i'm smitten with this piece. Openin bar was dope, set the tone.

sold short i was swindled ...AGGGH! plastic missiles!
i'm in a pickle i'm on the second last ship left to cripple
^^ ILL.

and visually impaired i hear a muttered tone of victory
held in suspense..a mystery..was i sunk? i'm jittery
my hands turned slippery and i looked above at fate
the nailed hand gripped weight i couldnt escape
^^ As po1ent said, this rolled of the tongue.. dope x's 2 Imagery.

fgee.. I commend you dog.. excellent piece. I'ma be lookin for more drops from you.

**Good look on the reply to my O.M. dog.**

-Formula.
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