Nice drop bro. Imagery was prevelant, vocab was up there, Flowed like a river.. which is always great. Lacked complexity, like you coulda went more in-depth.. but I was feelin the piece as a whole, so that can be overlooked. Lil intro set it up nicely.

Well, I was younger then, all these wrinkles werent relevant.
a fine young cadet then, not a retired washed out veteran.
^^ Great choice of openin bar cuz, was great.

I share this now so u wont make the same mistake that I did.
I'll forever search for her but in open space she keeps hiding.
I paid more attention to work, and no intention to make it work.
shed complain how I was never there, and to my kids I was a jerk.
^^ Damn good shit there man, thumbs up.

Keep droppin.. elevate with more complex pieces. (I haven't read any other drops from you, so if that comment is wrong, lemme know)



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-Formula.