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Originally posted by pot1ent
I assumed there was alot of emotion. .you didn't really write it though. .na'mean. .there was no imagery, very very basic vocab. .UP that. .Flow was the only thing i thought was good. .Apart from the fact that this meant alot too you. .
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Thanks for the input man. Lemme clarify somethin tho.. About the emotion.. some was there.. but this was kinda like a Reflection piece.. nawmean? Like there is emotion.. but most has been erased b/c it's been a year. Now if I had written this a year ago.. then you would expect alotta emotion. Thanks for the feedback tho.
-Formula.