Emotion needs some mega ups bro. Your 1st verse is just pointless, seems like a freestyle, no Hip Hop foundation in it at all. The chorus is really simple, need to work on your mixing so you can learn how to make your chorus' better. The complexity picks up with your second verse, flow and scheme pick up. The beat was a nice selection. As for your quality, it sounded alright on this track. Need to work on some adlibs, etc... Just takes time with Cool Edit Pro. Overall, you got talent though bro. Keep working at it.