it's aight thun but you got work on ya rhyming method da bars wasn't rhyming that well work on ya vocab you had alot of regular words in their switch things up kna mean other than that is was straight to me kna i'm sayin ~1~


p.s. when you tryin to write a song it's best to proofread ya shit after you wrote it so when you spit it you know what words to place or replace for ya bars