ok, flow was ok but it was on and off, vocab was a kinda weak...that could use some work...content was uhh, ok, but there wasnt anything that really caught my eye and stood out...structure was ok, try and make your bars more even though....keep dropping though, you'll get better...

if you get a chance peep my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88578

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