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Old 11-03-03, 02:04 AM   #7
IllLiterature
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From: indianapolis
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accapella was cool... not feeling the beat really..not battle flavor to me either.. flow is pretty much on point.. slips a couple times...delivery is ok.. could emphasize some things a little different to bring em out.. instead it seemed sometimes you just got louder... vocals should be dropped down some.. try and see if you could get a little of the clipping in your vocals too.. thatd help.. but i dont know if thats equipment or not.. lyrics are cool...overall a decent track homie.. nice work
keep dropping
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