Listenin....yer voice is off from that beat...almost seems like it was dubbed onto it. i'm listenin' to lyrics close and they are pretty tight. You need to change the pitch and flux of yer voice to seperate your chorus from the verses. Your voice is monotone (like Guru but with no energy), you gotta bring more energy kid. Sound quality of the mic or somethin with yer mic is bad. Again...good lyrics but audio levels and delivery need to be improved to catch peoples attention. Good structure to the song though.

look no link here, but check out in song forum and feed-back:
"A Thievez Execution"
"Incidental Contact"

they will either be on page 1 or 2 of song forum, most likely page 1....