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I got you kid.
I checked this shit and it was filled with tight vocab. At times the flow didn't match up, but that can be flipped nice when done audio style (i'm just readin it as text though). Good questions posed and thoughts expressed, seemed you were spittin truth of some life struggles you've had. The one line that was simple but clever that caught my attention was:
"the only light that found me was from an undercover when I couldn't run for cover"//-King of Thievez
nice shit on that. i'm feelin that cause i've been dealin with that...!
Anyway back to it. At times this had a lil' bit of a poemy feel but at other times like that last line you brought fire. I like the differences between rap and poetry though it meshed ok. Overall a nice lil' drop here. Good shit....
PM me back and let me know wassup wit our battle and shit....
Hey! feedback on "Incidental Contact" in the song forum. 1
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