haha dope ass drop son...flow was great, vocab was great, structure was great, content was great, it had some dope ass imagery in there...overall it was a really good drop son...dont see anything wrong with it...i'll be looking for more of your shit....keep dropping...

i dont know how it happened but i felt so small
at sea i was aboard in a plastic land of squalls
hardly enthralled i sent up an S.O.S voice
but the giant bared his joints contemplating a choice

nice couple of bars to open up ^


horizons stretch my beliefs i can see the window
and a familiar symbol out of reach memories rekindled
sold short i was swindled ...AGGGH! plastic missiles!
i'm in a pickle i'm on the second last ship left to cripple

like other peeps said, that was ill^


if you get a chance, peep my latest open mic...i could use some more feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88578

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