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Old 11-03-03, 07:57 AM   #12
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Were did vocab, complex go mines was poetry flow, ..read it..?

one line
rhyme
third line
rhyme

Oh well..

Vote mm cuz i couldnt understand my verse..
Way to high vocab ,...and it looks struggled, ..when u use hard Words..than the flow went of, ..cuz its audio so the meaning dsnt mean ne thing rite =/..

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Good writin it flowed good mm i heard it = ) Passion for my ears..

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