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Old 11-03-03, 10:14 AM   #6
DeadlySpitta
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Aight.... 1st off... y'all both had a decent verse. I'll give ya that. But yaz sum of ur barz were kinda off and didnt rhyme. But thats all good. Now for poetic.... u did tha same thing but ur punches landed harder. Tha flow was a bit better and u had nice meta's and wordlpay. Honest Opinion and Vote.

VOTE: POETICTENDENCEEZ
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