Sitting alone, I...
Contemplate why...
Everything went away.
So I can try...
To say good bye...
And somehow be ok.
Never again will...
I feel anything till...
I come to terms with this.
But the voice so shrill...
Penetrates like a drill...
It's message always persists.
I'm now all alone...
I can hear myself moan...
My soul has been cut out...
Sliced to the bone...
By a call on the phone...
The facts left me no doubt.
Speed should of slowed...
But it was a slippery road...
And the guardrail came apart...
A police report showed...
Impact made it explode...
Incinerating what's in my heart.
How can they be gone...
My two beautiful swans...
I need them, are they unaware?
Love can't be withdrawn...
So to their graves I'm drawn...
Laying across two mounds in despair.
But I've brought a friend...
It's gonna help me mend...
All the scars this has brought me.
As a flash brings to end...
My soul's hand extends...
As I join them and again become happy.
This is, thank God, not something I went through.
But I'm sure husbands and fathers go through it everyday somewhere...
This is for them.
I'm sorry.
Shit Happens by kevx301
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