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Old 11-03-03, 02:49 PM   #8
IllLiterature
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From: indianapolis
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you came in like whoa.. down the vocals a little.. i hear some breath sounds i think.. maybe need a pop stopper...wind screen or something...delivery is pretty decent.. you need to get a little more attacking sometimes..but you carried the why is he trying me voice well...kind of remind me of jay or something.. flow is on point mostly.. this was a good track man.. different than the usual battle style...wortthless like a fat bitch that dont suck lol @ that.. didnt like the outro.. hen it got funny..when you clowned him...nnice shizzle man
keep dropping
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