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Old 11-03-03, 03:07 PM   #3
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This was an ok little "prop yaself" verse...

You should kinda be slapped for using 'Mekhi Phifer' in ya rhyme when Eminem already did it before you...

But I guess it's forgivable.

The ending was tight...

I liked that and can relate...

Nice metas, but use a touch of wordplay here and there.

Pretty ok verse, dog.

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