hey girl, its been awhile, good to see you dropping your great stuff again!!!

this piece when i started reading i thought it was going to all being going down hill, but it didnt it surprised me, and i liked it.
it had a good sence that i can do anything that i want to do and you cant bring me down or stop me. it was very lighting.

Your vocab in this piece fit well, didnt over do it, and it discribed things nicely. The flow worked and sounds good also. structure was a basic, but it didnt effect it any.

thought it was a good, soul rising piece!!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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