ok beat is cool.. vocals need cleaned some.. that may be mic tho.. overall kind of quiet on the whole.. need a windscreen or something.. i hear the breath pop a little..maybe just back a little off the mic.. flow is ok.. but slips at points... delivery is ok.. it just lacks some of the emotion id liek to hear .. overall this is a cool track.. just a few little things to improve on.. mostly quality
keep dropping
return the favor please...
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