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Old 11-03-03, 07:07 PM   #2
Gene Pool
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yo bro. tha was some deep shit. lotsa good wordplay basic rhyme scheme till closer to the end where it got a lil more complex. lotsa good multi's and ya flow was tight. and really good vocab and some complex lines man. keep doin ur thing bro that shit was tight. peace.
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