structure and rhyme was consitent throughtout the verse...some rhymes were very simple, but they were nice in conveying the simplicity of the verse as a whole, and the understanding of YOUR emotions...
this wasn't really a cry of confusion, it was more of an understanding, which is nice to see...you weren't bitching or complaining about all the shit u did and she did...
Its hard to do a piece like this and not sound corny...in some parts u suceeded in avoidance this, and in others u feel into this trap...for example..
The ones I used to swear, came from up above
that seemed corny to me..
other than that this was a pretty enjoyable read...props to u for understanding ur emotions, rather than being mad at them
cheers