Quite extraordinary. Cos i remember a couple years ago i did something exactly like this (the concept that is, though from my broken memory the direction was different). I wrote for ages around 6 pages.

So this made me strangley and obscurely nostalgic.

Very original. Tackling philosophical issues in a quite epic yet grounded way. Well maybe if it'd been longer and/or more 'crafted' it'd been epic epic (yes i know i used it twice!).

But it did seem you sketched it rather than drew it. Which i think you kind of hinted at the end with the 'just playing around'. Though of course you 'sketching' it as such didn't effect it in a bad way. Rather in a good way. Showing your ability to put quite profound things down in a relatively quick and 'untouched' way.

Very good for what it was in my opinion. I enjoyed reading it.

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