Aight....

I liked how you used multis in this piece. It made the flow link together and come out nicely.

I see a lot of battle pieces for open mics all over...try an touch on different subjects instead. I'd like to see different pieces come out from you.

The piece was pretty simple...so the vocab fit the vibe you was pushing...but more hard to touch subjects up for better vocab, so keep that in mind.

Overall.....I enjoyed this...some lines was actually good...like

Phoenix is the home of hoes sluts and one nights
Genius's are know to hit bitches like bumfights

^^^it made me laugh

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