I beg to differ with WORD~PERFECT....I thought this piece brought depth

This piece seemed more like a poem, but it's all good...the piece was fuckin ill!

The structure was simple...but you told an entire small story without saying too much....much like a poem as I've said...but you got your point out across with good vocab and rhyme scheme...good lookin on this piece right here!

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