Not a bad collabo... Flow was good for Masta C.. but Gene, tweak the flow a bit, shorten some lines, then you'll be good aight? Masta, you had the flow down and also some good lines.

I remember the first-time, I started to hurt-minds..
With complex word-rhymes, probably my worst-crime..
Cause my brain-ached, wishing I could relieve the same-take..
And this fame-makes, nothing but more lame-fakes…
I remember when I broke-laws, cause I wrote-flaws..
And I joked-all, but I beat everyone cause I spoke-raw…
^^ That whole part right there was dope dog. Nice shit.

Gene, can't forget about the lines that caught my eye from you.

as the years go by, I’ve lived out my life, and now I got 5 grandchildren, that like to put up fights/
but like me, I cut through the strife, cuz I know what life is like, in a teenagers plight/
^^ Very nice, good flow. Good imagery, talkin bout how ya grandkids like to put up fights.

I remember that time I almost fell off that cliff, 200 feet to a huge cement brick/
woulda been buried, and yea we were all scared as shit, cuz we were trippin on that bag a weed we hit/
^^ Great Flow ! Flow makes the piece.

Hook was average, definately needs a lil work. Jus work on the hook, and Gene, work on the flow a bit, and this will turn into a good audio.

-Formula.

*Feedback appreciated for my two drops: Dear Mom and Dad and I Did You Wrong*

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