This piece was aight....just seems like the usual battle type verses I've seen on the open mics...

You vocab was good...except you don't now how ta spell obese(obiece) or cellulite(selulite)...at least look em up real quick...an I know when ya on a mic it dont matter...but when ya stickin um on a website for cats to read...it kinds fucks flow up to figure out what word you was really meaning....feel me?

Other than that shit...ya flow was good...Bring some more deep pieces...I feel that you can bring more heat....

Overall....I liked reading the piece....just check them words b4 ya be puttin em down

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