Good drop. Structure was ok but the meaning was heartfelt. Seems like there is a lot of love put into this and whoever ur writing this to is probably very happy. You make it seem as if she is unstable, but you ensure her that you will not make your mistakes again. Its like even though you can be the toughest person, when it comes to her, youre soft. Sorry to put it like that, seeing ur a guy. Overall, great job. Keep droppin. Most respect.