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Old 11-03-03, 10:30 PM   #4
DaIllistReBel
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Lol ok, I do appreciate u spittin now so we can get some votes in, here is mine, 8lines:


Like "Nike" the best part of ur verse could be "check, check"//
This sneakHERB's punches will "never hit", always "on deck"//
Ur no prospect, no lines of yours will have an effect//
Like a "blind man tryin to box" ur punches will "never connect"//
With that, a loss u deserve, a win for me I'll preserve//
Compare this battle to "tennis" cause u about to get "served"//
Ur punches aren't "sharp", they "needle"(need a little) experience//
No coherence, expect a "W?" RBs only laughin at ur verse's appearance//


EXPLANATIONS:

Nike sneakers are known for the checks, basically the logo.
For the simple mind, a needle is sharp.
In tennis, a serve is a stroke.


Ok, let's get some votes
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