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Old 11-03-03, 10:49 PM   #9
DaIllistReBel
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The breakdown for the most part:

Anibus- U had punches, but they never hit hard at any time. Mainly because the rope and the christmas lines I have both seen before. The flow was actually pretty good until u g2 "oh my bad, am I g2 hard", a wack line and ruins the flow completely. However, your finisher was very good. It was ok I guess, but harder punches with better wordplay and metas and similies and multies would help.

Eye Que- Solid drop for the most part. The one you had was consistancy in your punches. It didn't look line even any of lines were really wasted. Even included a personal with some good word play making fun of his name. Beginning was good except I don't like the lines with "Oops, my bad" but w/e. The 'closest to wack line was nice.' Start to finish, a solid verse

Overall, my vote goes to Eye Que for better punches and wordplay. Please hit this battle up w/ an honest vote, much appreciated pz.

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