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Old 11-03-03, 11:02 PM   #13
DaIllistReBel
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Wow, nice battle, the breakdown for the most part:

Born To Kill- I have definately seen better from you, it looks like you underestimated him a little bit. In my opinion, your main flaw was the consistancy of your punches. The guerrilla was one of your best and if you would have kept that up, then I think you could pulled it off. The blah blah blah line was bad, and the closing wasn't as good as mr.iceman's. Decent drop, but could have been better.

mr.iceman06- A personal comedy, your verse was solid. Punches were there, and the wordplay with the g-unit line was nice, added a personal in there. I was feeling it all the way, you came with hard hitting punches that were consistant every line. Your best part came at the end, that sealed it for you.

Overall, mr.iceman took it with more consistancy, and personals. Both of you please hit up my battle, much appreciated. Good battle again pz.


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