Agreeance wit JT. Structure and vocab dont matter. Emotion and meaning were felt. What u feel is what matters. Write from ur heart, and it should just flow. Seems as if there are some signs of sorrow, and hate. You are right and ppl do change, not always for the good. I recieved a letter kind of like this once before. This was full of emotion and ur thoughts were understood. Even if it sounds corny in some parts, as long as ur thoughts are understood, nothing else really matters. Overall great job on it. Keep it up. Most respect.