FUCKIN DOPE SPIT SEEKRET. i felt that shit the whole way through dawg.....tight at punches hittin hard consisitently...an excellent solid verse. damn. that was good haha
other fool......good start ur new....try to make sure ya shit flows well and stays in a good rythm otherwise fools wont be able to feel it when readin it. and more punches dawg. like seek said in his verse. nice try though fa real.

vote: Seekret

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