Nitemare started off strong, but then he had some weak punches like:
'Swallows' when he Sucks Dick to say 'He Drank In Da South'||
^^Weak.
Yo Fate on Dis Site is Like Yo Profile-Just Questionmarks||
^^^not exactly a diss, almost a compliment.
I Crushes Hearts, U Cant Understand Me Like Russian Narks
^^sounded like you dissed yourself.
GotchA 'Layin Down' Quicka than 'Tight Ends Stayin In Bounds'||
^^didn't quite understand that one.

his verse was about the same, even punches and intensity:
Ya rap is "suckin" like "Dracula", quickly runnin outa "stanima"//
^^wack.
Talk gangsta an shit, da last time u shot some 1 was wit a "camera"//
^^^kindaa fed off his first line with this.
Tryin ta beat me wit "big words", but da only way u could do dat is "increasen ya font size"//
^^^ok punch, ya'll both used the same Kalibur of words tho'.
Once agin anotha white boy actin black, shit lyk dat is gonna get u cracked//
^^^not a punch, just talk.
In-fact, dis kats brain must not b "In-Tact", written ya text in BOLD, is da only way dey gonna make an "impact"//\
^^blah ok punch, kinda played tho. You had too many sorta played lines in your verse.

uh, I'm gonna have to go with nitemare since i think his was better structured.


my vote=nitemare