fuck me dead, this was awesome..... i loved your rhyme scheme, you had the flow shifting between internals and end of line... if oyu know what i mean... it worked well... your vocab was good, rhymes were good, and you kept the topic consistent and it worked well... just add some multis in... thats the only thing i found faulty... but still, this open mic was dope... keep writing

9/10

check out my open mic "Mind Theory" please... thanks