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Old 11-04-03, 12:35 PM   #9
Born To Kill
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Stuck fucked this up...

Clear and brutal merking.

He took this with heavier punches.
Better wordplay.
And some nice humorous metas.

PS came pretty played.
Some of it was borderline elementary, sorry.
Like, ending ya spit with the "verse/hearse" rhyme scheme.
Using "Scrabble" is really old as shit.

Just use more thought, looks like writer's block hit ya and you just went with whatever.

Seen better from you, PS...

Peace
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