not bad
like sureal said some of the bars were trying to fit too many syllables into a linemaking the flow a bit choppy in places
content was personal but i cant say i was gripped by it
seemed to lack something..maybe the flow disrupted it
not an original topic but everyone has a different view on emotions etc so each drop is usually unique to the teller
pretty solid verse..just work on the rhyming aspects and maybe add some imagery..i find that keeps my attention usually in a verse