Sup Genisis...
The title drew me into this thread, I like original titles, something different, and "Time to cry" made me curious and fit the standard.
The piece was very well written, I honestly felt it..For a newbie, you're very talented (not that all newbies suck) but you said you just started writing and this was a lot better than what I expected..Nice concept supported with great imagery, and I especially liked how the rhyme scheme was unpredictable..(Sometimes people have ending words like, look, took, book, ect.) I like when the words seem to just coincedentally sound alike.
My favorite parts were these:

"nothing is constant, time passes erratic
the devil himself plots against me with tactic
got me actin crazy, smokin herb like an addict
tryin to hear god but all i hear is static"

^Very well written

"my chest, rise and fall, wasted air again
it coulda been a breath for one who didnt sin"

Deep line, and also the last line was a great ending..The last line is always important..

Nice job with this, I really liked it..
I'll keep an eye out for more of your stuff.
Keep postin n elevatin.
pz.