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Old 11-04-03, 03:04 PM   #7
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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Hey Gyrl...
This was a great piece, simple yet very meaningful and touching..I LOVED the message in it, and even though it had some negative references, the overall attitude was positive, and that's sort of rare.

I especially liked the third and fourth stanzas, and the last line was beautiful..

Very well written, Dee..
You have lots to offer this forum..
Stay up! Nice drop.
Pz.
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