He Cried Oceans< that was very appropriate & tight where it was & also a dope opener. .

His Mother Withering Away, With Her Skin Touching Tone..
His Home.. Fermented Foundation, Slowly Time Has Broke..
Provoked, < nice switch up, maybe a bit too early on in the
piece but it didn't hinder the flow. .So all good

But generally they were all very deep & meaningful lines to keep interest throughout the piece. .I think I can say. .You done the man proud. .I really felt this piece. .Props. .