DAMN
i'm most definetly feeling this one

^ that last line really stuck out for me

throughout this whole piece i had a great feel of where you was coming from
"Heavenly Melodies, With Concentrated Sin."
nice
you have a way with words
it read like it should go with a beat

this piece was.... i cant even find the word
well thought out, nicely executed
much respect

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."