interesting

you did the job of letting what you feel inside known
you can't really (well i cant) go in depth about freewrites like this
but sometimes freewrites are the most effective ways of getting deep and serious things off your chest and into the minds of others
keep writin
and remember that w/e the situation you deserve the best, love shouldn't cause overwhelming pain, and if it does then it might not be right, make sure what your doing is right always, stay up

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."