so could've been your review, but ok, it was an overall good piece, vocab was nicely put down, wordplays were on point, the subject was kinda "eh", you had pretty tight-nit flow, jus one thing, wen your doing anything its kinda elementary to be using "-" or any other types of signs to point out stuff, if u ever do use it only let it be in a battle, but an overall good piece

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..